
Am I floating
Yes I’m floating
In the form of a kiss
Sweet fingertips roam
Like birds of a feather
Tingling and tickling
Till it all feels better
Wash over my curves
Of rage and desire
Arches of dampness
Set souls on fire
A burst of excitement
And blinding light
This all from a simple
Kiss goodnight -VSN
Love it, Val! And ironically, your poem reminds me of an old one of mine: http://lscotthoughts.com/2011/12/08/the-kiss/
♥ ♥
Ohh! I felt a chill go up my back just now. Beautiful poem Val! I’m sitting at home taking a snow day. I’ll make it productive by reading more of your blog
What is snow?
A good, great, fascinating kiss…. love this poem Val, it reminds me how the kiss can change everything….
Amen to that.
I like it! I like it a lot! Once again you are subtly erotic with your style, and yet still very erotic, and you expressed very well what lovers kiss is all about.
Thank you Mark
Thank YOU Val. My pleasure.
Beautiful and sensuous!
Thank you Edward:-)
Congrats on your award. Lovely poem, very creative!
Thank you!
Hello,
I have nominated you for The Very Inspiring Blogger Award. Please check http://www.TheReporterandTheGirl.com for award rules and a list of nominations which include you! Congratulations, you worked very hard and you deserve it, happy weekend and great blog!
TheGirl
Thank you so much =-)
Your verse creates excellent imagery. Look forward to reading more.
Shakti
Thank you =-)
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